Beautifully written and so true. Good job.

Edit this so the whole thing is not bolded, please. Its a bit... MUCH OO;

Well, there isn't much to say. It's marvelous, beautiful, and flows extremely well.

Also, it pains me to say it's true.

Unless, of course, you're like me and a rebel.

Anyhow.

You know I love it. I don't believe there is anything I could ask of you to do better...you're an amazing writer and much better than me.

-shakes a fist-

>_O

well Done!!

If I were You (which would scare Me), I would continue this, moving foward ageneration for each chapter. discuss each girl's (boy's?) relaion to the prevous generation, and to earlier ones.

Live forever, or die Trying!!

Clearly and well written, good research and interesting topic. Bravo!

I really like this, but I don't know why...

it was an interesting read. you write beautifully.

Hey! Wow that was really good! The wording was nice and I think it's a story that a lot of girls and women can relate to.

We have all thought, Yeah my mom was hip, popular, perfect. But now it's my turn to step up to the plate. Some of us might even create our own style, but we will all be society girls in our own way and our daughters and granddaughters and great-granddaughters will do the same, even if they don't realize it.

All in all, a fantastic read. It was to the point and that makes it great. Thanks for writing it!

I like it a lot, apart from two words...

one "class" - unless you meant social class.

two "teenager" - not a word used commonly till later.

Really good, keep writing and researching the language...