|Reviews for Your World|
| Stormer 3/30/08 . chapter 1
I'm not quite sure why, but these were my favourite lines:
I can see the light
The letters are stained the black of night
Maybe because of the way they rhyme :)
I really enjoyed this poem! I'm from the Reviewer's Alliance but I don't mind about the competition - just a review for a review is good by me :)
| Jen 6/23/07 . chapter 1
I love it how emmathree said it was dangerously close to romantic... I almost pissed myself laughing!:p But I can easily see how it it coud be romantic (because I am in fact, occasionaly a hopeless romanic). Um... so in the romatic sense of the poem and just between you and I, (in refrence to the poem) will you allow me to be a part of your world?
... I'm actually shaking enough that I can't type :( sorry...
| Kristina Suko 9/19/06 . chapter 1
Hm... I'm not sure if I like it or not... lol. Interesting, for sure.
D Maranwe Telrunya
| emmathree 8/4/06 . chapter 1
I like this one the most out of your work, I think.
It's very plain at first glance, but has a certain otherworldly quality that I didn't quite expect.
Although it borders dangerously close to romantic, considering whose world you're talking about.
| Shades Of Autumn 7/8/06 . chapter 1
I loved this poem- it's beautiful, with a delicatly-hidden meaning...just lovely. Well done, and thanks for your review on Threnody!
| Maeko Nohara 6/15/06 . chapter 1
This was very beautiful- ethereal and serene. :) Thanks for your review! That's a great idea; I hadn't thought of it. I suppose I'll just pick a favourite time period and go off of that as best I can. I'll see how well I'll do. If I get enough good ones I'll make a collection of sorts to post.