Great introduction. Your character is a teensy bit nutty. I approve. The grandmother's perspective was good, gave that bnit of extra insight and understanding of what was going on. The emotions Alica goes through are very well described. YEY!!

hoy crap, please write again! this is quite intreging...

Aw poor girl, she sounds crazy lol please please update! It's an awesome story~Lots of Love and Pain, Mezo~

Wow that's sad, still a good story =)~Lots of Love and Pain, Mezo~

I really like Alicia...feel sorry for her though, obviously.

Ew... I could so smell her grandma's room...

xo

dude, does this mean whoever "I" is will go into the fit of her life? must read more!

ps, if you can guess who i am, thats pretty funny!

this is very interesting, update soon!

it's quite a good start, but belongs in one of the fiction categories.

:( Poor kid. :(

I can't wait to read more. This sounds like it will be pretty good...and my review is going to be short and sucky.

Love xoxo

wow very good, I especially Loved the introduction...

This is amazing. It's so sad and gripping, raw and real. It's going to be one of my favorites.