Wow! This piece is blindingly truthful...if love "gags" or "binds" then it truly is a lie. Thanks for writing!

I love the way you write. It's not too terribly out-there to make me not want to read it, but then again, it's not so simple that I can just glance over it and still see the whole picture. It pulls you in, per out that you're 'bound' to a lie...a very emotional piece. Enjoyed the last four lines particularly.

that's so sad. wow. what a writer you are!

many thanks for your review. cheers! :)

oh wow this is brill I love it! Keep it up!

this is good. shows alot of determination and wanting. seems alittle rough to me(but, what do i know of poetry?) and a little sad to me, but all-in-all, well done.