It saddens me how people try looking for love and accept it when the thing they have found the real deal. Love has to find you first. Your poem leaves me thinking.

EB

Well then, sorry about lack of reviews, I shall try to remedy it.

I'm not sure what to say about this, though I do like the ending and how it ties in with the beggining.

"So beautiful its timeless." I like that line on it's own but even more so where you posistioned it in this poem.

ANNA

P.S. thanks for the review...I'm sorry I'm not too great at them and all...eheh.

Nice poem. It seems as if the narrators views on violence and romance change. At the begining of the poem they state the two "act together as expected" then at the very end they see something. And they are able to finally have their opinion on the subject. See they ahve been hurt and hate that violence trails romance. So i am just rambling but am i anywhere close?