| Reviews for Toothlessku |
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Travis C. Eckert 7/4/06 . chapter 1Kind of weird metaphor you have at end, though I am sure that is how it felt. |
wildwolffree17 6/23/06 . chapter 1I've felt like that. Well done. |
Ultimate Schuyler 6/16/06 . chapter 1Lol. I liked the way you wording this haiku, with "home" and "exploring" and "chewing". It was awesome. |
Dale Christopher 6/14/06 . chapter 1Its cool how you took a kinda mundane (abeit painful) event and turned it into this broody haiku. Thankfully, I've never had any teeth pulled. Daze |
Faithless Juliet 6/14/06 . chapter 1Reminds me of when I had to get my wisdom teeth pulled, I have tough teeth, I think they had to take a crowbar to them. Needless to say I was in a lot of pain. Keep up the good work. Juliet. |
elvenstorm 6/14/06 . chapter 1Well thats certainly a different subject to choose, like reading original poetry. Simple and well written, keep it up x |