|Reviews for Toothlessku|
| Travis C. Eckert 7/4/06 . chapter 1
Kind of weird metaphor you have at end, though I am sure that is how it felt.
| wildwolffree17 6/23/06 . chapter 1
I've felt like that. Well done.
| Ultimate Schuyler 6/16/06 . chapter 1
Lol. I liked the way you wording this haiku, with "home" and "exploring" and "chewing". It was awesome.
| Dale Christopher 6/14/06 . chapter 1
Its cool how you took a kinda mundane (abeit painful) event and turned it into this broody haiku. Thankfully, I've never had any teeth pulled.
| Faithless Juliet 6/14/06 . chapter 1
Reminds me of when I had to get my wisdom teeth pulled, I have tough teeth, I think they had to take a crowbar to them. Needless to say I was in a lot of pain. Keep up the good work.
| elvenstorm 6/14/06 . chapter 1
Well thats certainly a different subject to choose, like reading original poetry. Simple and well written, keep it up x