Sarcastic, and bitter, and passive aggressive. Very much so my style.
'Oh deary me' really made that particular stanza, it displayed how shockingly bitter you were pretending not to be.
There didn't seem to be a great deal of rhythm, but I thought that fit the piece rather well.
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I love the voice in this. The narrator is so sarcastic and bitter. Wonderful. You use the word "it" a lot throughout this piece, and I think the poem might work better if you specified what "it" was. I realize that most of the time, "it" is referring to the heart, but the poem would be stronger with concrete words there. Just something I learned from a writing professor. Keep writing! :)

Its always nice to see a new style. I must admit I was searching for any sort of rhyme through most of it, but I read it a few times and decided I liked it. Wonderous =)

Great piece, love the slightly humourous, slightly morbid, slightly upbeat feel to it! Line 'Oh deary me...' just made me laugh. You have a wonderfully frank way of writing what you mean without hiding it in pretty phrases and love that honesty. It's so refreshing. Well done x