Excellent last bit. The formatting was interesting, how you broke the sentences and all of that. 'Time and time again, I break my feet,

just for you to mold again.'

Just for you to mold THEM again? Or are you speaking in a larger sense, of the subject's emotional structure? I like this piece. There are many questions like that. I like being able to make something different of it. Super job. Last lines, really phenomenal.