lovely~good job in manipulating the colours!

Whoa. That's REALLY deep. I really like it though. Good work.

(P.S - Thanks for the tips. I really appreciate them.)

You know, that's a very interesting thought. I never really considered poetry being a direct window to the soul. I mean, I've always known poetry to be the deepest expression of feeling possibly, but...I liked this. The only thing I could even think of criticizing on would be when you had a period in a line and continued on with another thought anyway. It doesn't read badly, however, so I guess you're alright with that. =)

~Write on!