Witty and fun! And a little bit surreal. All great qualities of fantasy fiction- keep it up!

Wonderful chapter! I knew there was something up with that dove. Never trust doves. Update soon!

*laughing*

Oh, that was funny. Nobody could be that happy to see the fish and NOT be evil. Hilarious. King Fox may have been sneaky, untruthful, and persistently at war, but at least he didn't resort to things like that.

So. Freaking. Hilarious.

The first chapter just left me thinking 'huh?', and this second chapter still leaves me confused...but somehow I'm intrigued...keep it up, this diary is bizarre, but in a good way ;)

Awaking kills the Dream

A very interesting, humouress story you have here. I love how you began it (with the pages being eaten and all) and the characters within it (particularly the fish who has yet to recieve a name *though I doubt he'll get on*). I'll definitely be watching this story. Write soon!

Fun so far! Pretty good banter.

Hey Azzandra! Haven't heard from ya' in a while... guess it comes from summer finally being here. Thanks for the laugh!

(Tricrax)