*falls out of chair*

*gets back in chair with Muse's help*

Whoa... I... whoa... I don't know what to say. Everything is just so...

Why did Gabe do what he did? I mean... why... why throw it all away? I'm still not getting that. >__>

Flonne was supposed to save Ryoma. And Destiny was screwed up thanks to Gabe. Oh, oh... is Gabe going to become all outcasted and stuff?

I don't like Gabe. Sorry... I'm a Lucas fan at heart. I just feel the need to remind you everytime I review... apparently. I don't care what anyone else says. This is MY review to YOU.

*fangirl squee* *holds up "I

Those last two sentences are rather ominous...

:) CD

OH! Suspense is killing me. What will happen? By the way, good job bringing all the characters together. I likezes. I did that on purpose. Tell Dragon Ryoma that Visice could kick his butt.

Yes I do agree with you that you have improved as a writer, greatly! I Lucas had been a girl would she have been a lesbian because i think you would have lost many readers for that. lol ok enought of my stupidtity wasting your time

Good chapter. Now we know more about this angel guy, and about angels in general. Nice spinoff. Keep up the good work!

YES!! SWEET!!

Fun stuff. *nodnod*

:D CD

You almost made Lucas a girl!! *slaps you so hard just for the thought* I can't believe that!

*ahem* That aside... let's move to the current issue.

Okay, I'm totally fangirling for Gabe now. You expected that though, didn't you? You made Gabe just to make me squeal. *glares*

your writing + third person = much better ^_^

Not saying it wasn't good before... I'm just biased when it comes to first person vs. third person.

Hm, I'm really digging that Gabe isn't sure what he's doing is right... I know you meant to be dramatic, but if I were about to throw away my immortality, I would d* sure that it was for a good cause.

Of course, we as readers ALL know that Ryoma is innocent... and something screwy is going on.

But does Gabe? Is he 100% certain... you built it up like he was, then he said "I'm not" It just doesn't make sense.

Yep, that's just what I think. Great work though!! I can't wait for more typy noises! ^_^