Did I like it? Ahh! Firstly, I know that you decided to end this story unfinished but Im still gonna review. Anyways, I absolutely adored this so far! The empty thing is so powerful and how she identifies. This whole time I've been reading this story and like, "I like this Lindsey kid" and i couldn't figure out why I liked her. I usually like the funny, bitchy characters as long as they show some sign of a heart or have a reason why they're so damaged but she didn't have one. She raped somebody, she molests people, she fucks with people's minds. She was sick before, and she still is, but now your starting to explain why she's so messed up. I adore your writing. Also, love the love-hate relationship between them. It's thrilling, erotic, and completely lovable in a very hatable way.

Please continue pleease :(

Why dont u just write a freaking end? just a fucking chapter :(

I'm sorry but...this really dissapointed me. You're a wonderful writer and the story is great, it's just that Jackie acts almost nothing like a rape victim; which is what she seems to be based on your description. Trudy behaves more like one but Jackie just doesn't. It makes the story much less real and very unbelievable. I tried hard to give it the benefit of the doubt but I couldn't finish this chapter. I'm sorry.

Hey just read this andd enjoy. Bit sad about the ending but oh well. Just wondering if you still write?

Man, my comp died forever ago and it took me forever to remember the name of this story since I lost all my book marks. Sad to see the story end but re-reading and getting to read al you did have up was a blast. One of my top fav stories for sure. Hope to see some writing of yours again someday even if it's a new story. :)

Yo! So I read your story over the summer, I had no net [saved it on a usb] and I thought you might like a review, though it's mostly commentary. Here it is!

Chapter 2: Lmfao. o_O Poor Jackie. :S I really like the story so far. :D Different than most
Chapter 11: I'm extremely frustrated with the events going on in the story. I mean, Jackie just got like flippin raped. And she's not calling the cops, telling her sister, she's not doing anything. Not realistic at all if you ask me. -wants to kill Lindsey-
Chapter 21: Yup. Still ticked off. People are so stupid.
Chapter 26: Yay! Kinda happy ending. I wonder what's going to happen next. If Lindsey will be nice and sweet to Jackie and if she'll stop forcing herself on Jackie. I really don't get it. -_- The characters in this story are kind of messed up and I don't get how Jackie isn't scarred forever from Lindsey forcing herself on her all the time. But oh well.. good-ish story, bad characters. Mandy, Kyle, Eugene and the rest of the Jackie's family [not counting her] seem like the only "real" characters. Trudy too. and the Gym teacher. The rest are.. unrealistic, if I may.
Chapter 27: LOL. I thought Wit was a guy. [Read ending of Chapter 47]
Chapter 28: Yay! Finally. A non-raped sexual scene between the two main characters. :d
Chapter 31: Yup. Better. Much better.
Chapter 34: Btw, none of the "intimate" scenes you wrote so far have turned me on. :P
Chapter 35: Wowz. At this chapter I realized that there was almost nothing about school for awhile. :O
Chapter 38: Yikes. I actually like Wit, kinda.
Chapter 41: Writing style? Excellent. Story, dissected? Kinda.. horrible.. Story, overall? Decent. My opinion. :S
Chapter 47: I still want to continue reading this story tho. :) Mandy and Wit is definitely not something to miss.

Love this story very much! Best story i read in my life!

Love this story very much!

Best story i ever read!

I'm sorry. But this made me flip over a table in frustration. It was a great story though, I loved it! T-T

I just found this a few days ago. Someone mentioned it on a website so i thought why not check it out? i CANNOT believe i just found this! gahhh and my mouth dropped at the ending.. lol it was nice though.. even though you're not gonna update it anymore.. this is gotta be the best book ive read so far.. it had everything i imagined.. i got some sick fantasies... lol :P

Good erotic stuff.

Hello!

Awesome porn (what! I say truth) story!XD

It has a good plot with progress in main heroes characters. There were interesting thoughts. Though I think you're right saying that it better be finished when they say love you. After this there were strange things, that weren't too logical.

Just thank you for good story!

truly amazing, and a nice twist ending even if yo wont ever complete it, you have a true gift for writing. quite thrilling for as long as it goes on, it is still to this day one of my favorite stories. i read from time to time. thank you for sharing it with the world.