Wow this is amazingly clear with imagry, I would think. Masterful.

It seems as if this poem itself embodies the idea. I love the raw, beautiful feel to this. Keep writing!

with your bare feet... so you can experience the beauty first hand with childlike amazement - wide eyed & speechless.

perfection. so lightly-stepped. full of moonbeams and mystery. the first line is to be worshipped by all.

i love the first two lines...but for some reason the last two seem a little weak...it think it may be in the word choice

repulsive beauties

reminds me of three am and no sweaters

i love that first line.. that similie is so original and so perfect. the rest is great too... awesome job

alphabet soup? very, very awesome... love how alphabet soup and eyes relate in a strange, but somewhat right way.

beautiful poem

this poem is amazing. you are my hero.

i've known eyes to hold many things but never had i thought of alphabet soup. so many possibilities. that was genius.

and, yeah, overall just awesome, again.

oh, that beginning. yes. yes. yes.

wow. i love how you took something so small and made it into this... i love the first line. and the second... and ... hell, i loved all of it.

amazing.

god, i do love that ending line and the first one is oddly cute-weird. of and you use repulsive and eternity and i love you for using both words in one line. :)

~* Noelle