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X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2007-09-28 ch 1,	abuseWow this is amazingly clear with imagry, I would think. Masterful.
printed-peppermint 2006-08-24 ch 1,	abuseIt seems as if this poem itself embodies the idea. I love the raw, beautiful feel to this. Keep writing!
coldsunlight 2006-08-06 ch 1,	abusewith your bare feet... so you can experience the beauty first hand with childlike amazement - wide eyed & speechless.
the naked civil servant 2006-07-05 ch 1,	abuseperfection. so lightly-stepped. full of moonbeams and mystery. the first line is to be worshipped by all.
Susie Mango 2006-06-23 ch 1,	abusei love the first two lines...but for some reason the last two seem a little weak...it think it may be in the word choice
Aquafied 2006-06-20 ch 1,	abuserepulsive beauties reminds me of three am and no sweaters
simpleplan13 2006-06-20 ch 1,	abusei love that first line.. that similie is so original and so perfect. the rest is great too... awesome job
burning in effigy 2006-06-16 ch 1,	abusealphabet soup? very, very awesome... love how alphabet soup and eyes relate in a strange, but somewhat right way. beautiful poem
B. M. Reed 2006-06-16 ch 1,	abusethis poem is amazing. you are my hero.
astral boy 2006-06-16 ch 1,	abusei've known eyes to hold many things but never had i thought of alphabet soup. so many possibilities. that was genius. and, yeah, overall just awesome, again.
dollface and her cancer 2006-06-15 ch 1,	abuseoh, that beginning. yes. yes. yes.
a lonely september 2006-06-15 ch 1,	abusewow. i love how you took something so small and made it into this... i love the first line. and the second... and ... hell, i loved all of it.
poetic abortion 2006-06-14 ch 1,	abuseamazing. god, i do love that ending line and the first one is oddly cute-weird. of and you use repulsive and eternity and i love you for using both words in one line. :) ~* Noelle

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