The repetition of "Clever rogue" works very nicely. Your words fit so well together, I can never understand how you can have such a command over the language.

"They bury you with insincerity."

"My low born hero"

"Your silver tongue your only treasure."

Just some of my favorite lines.

Cool, you updated. The grammar for this piece seemed a bit last stanza has quotes around the last exchange, but not the first.I liked the idea of this poem; it really shines through, especially with the lines,"Teach me that tune;Which changes any line to musicOne song enough for all of us."Some other minor grammar errors, like:"And smile flashing, use them" I think there should be another comma after 'And.'"My low born hero" My low-born heroAnd I don't think there should be a semicolon after 'tune.'I think that's all. "A teller of falsehoods but no false friends." I like that line. ;)I was a bit confused as to why you titled this piece "Red," but I'll ask you about that later.