 Artemis Anderson 2007-09-12 . chapter 1Very well written. |
 Aquafied 2006-06-21 . chapter 1ah, the backhanded sarcasm in this makes me smile.
the teenage writing of "Wut's up?"
it's odd, because i dont have any personal friends that talk like that.lyke omgx3 you know? |
 DXM Junkie 2006-06-17 . chapter 1I like this. |
 Moondog Dozier 2006-06-16 . chapter 1The scene created, and the sincerity of feeling works well. I like the conversational tone, it adds to the overall theme. Modern, the flashbacks and repetition hold this together wonderfully. Good work. |
 ronshaberry 2006-06-14 . chapter 1Yeah, well YOU'RE special. Oh how biting. Write more. :D You're such a genius. |