 sarah loves charts. 2009-10-28 . chapter 2Pandora is really funny! I like her a lot. And Zeus's ~psychic~ phone call made me giggle. You've got such an interesting cast of characters here. Already I can see their personalities shining through. Good job! |
 sarah loves charts. 2009-10-28 . chapter 1Haha, love it. Pandora's narrative is fun and fluid and relatable. Her whole family seems just as quirky as can be. I can relate to the whole love of history that seems to run in the veins of everyone except for Pandora herself (though my chosen major is American History~) and overall, this was an incredibly entertaining and well-written beginning!
Good job! |
 criti-sized 2006-09-05 . chapter 2Very interesting first two chapters, I really liked Pandora's attitude, she sounds closer to a nonfictitious charcter, rather than a fictitious one. Hopefully you'll update soon. |
 ADSpencer 2006-09-05 . chapter 2Well do enlighten me! Great chapter, Trish! This story has such a refreshing voice. Great work. |
 ADSpencer 2006-06-15 . chapter 1I adore this story, Trish! Fantastic character. I think Pandora is awesome! Great work. I can't wait for the update. |
 fireinu 2006-06-14 . chapter 1I like it. I hope you update soon. |