1) I'm afraid that you've already abandoned this story ages ago, but I hope that your Muse will return one day...

2) I think that Pandora is the ideal narrator, since she admits that she doesn't really approve of her parents.

3) By the way, I must say that her family seems quirky. :)

Pandora is really funny! I like her a lot. And Zeus's psychic phone call made me giggle. You've got such an interesting cast of characters here. Already I can see their personalities shining through. Good job!

Haha, love it. Pandora's narrative is fun and fluid and relatable. Her whole family seems just as quirky as can be. I can relate to the whole love of history that seems to run in the veins of everyone except for Pandora herself (though my chosen major is American History) and overall, this was an incredibly entertaining and well-written beginning!

Good job!

Very interesting first two chapters, I really liked Pandora's attitude, she sounds closer to a nonfictitious charcter, rather than a fictitious one. Hopefully you'll update soon.

Well do enlighten me! Great chapter, Trish! This story has such a refreshing voice. Great work.

I adore this story, Trish! Fantastic character. I think Pandora is awesome! Great work. I can't wait for the update.

I like it. I hope you update soon.