Quite passionate... I could feel the heat coming off those words. Spite and animosity D:- of course everyone has issues within their own families, I'm surprised that you were open enough to share that with random strangers lol. A nice way to vent I suppose ;).

More reviewing on the way ^^.

Excellent work here as well.

As I meant to say before, your secret is now revealed and no longer kept hidden.

I KNOW. About HER. THE her.

LOVEthats allYou did a great job reading it too.HaHahaI love laughing

Oh boy oh boy - you have opened my eyes. I am going to write a poem RIGHT NOW on the problems in my family... why didn't I do this before? I completely relate to what you're syaing. Good job.

luv, Sa

some of the stanzas made me think of other things (relevant to my life) but I really liked how you captured everything.

Oh, try using shift + enter when you can edit it when you upload it, it usually works to bring it down one line instead of two.

Thank you for posting this. It made me realize that I'm not the only one with a screwed up family situation. =\

Hey, Vic! I absolutely loved it! You never told me you were going to write about this? I thought you were uncomfortable talking about it? Anyway, it was awesome, and powerful, and...angry. I could feel the waves of frustration and hate come off of you. :D Great job!~Hel