Wow, great job! I love how everything is starting to fit together. Even with the soldiers and such.

You've got a really awesome story going on here [as I'm sure I've said before, heh] and I can't wait for future updations. ^^

Much love and God bless!

-SS [formally WJ4]

I'm very happy you're updating this again!

I really like what you're doing with this. I wasn't sure how well it would work with the narration after they all met, but you pulled it off well. I am looking forward to reading more.

AH! It CAN'T END YET!

This is amazing. As I've probably said many times before. But it is. So there.

I can't wait for the next chapter. PLEASE say that it's coming soon?!

I really love it and would TOTALLY buy a copy if you made it into a book.

Ah, well, I'll be a waitin for the next chappy! See ya later.

W4J

Interesting...

Very nice twists you have here. *off to read more*

Ahha! And we have the mysterious boy's perspective! What a twist.

Wonderful!

I don't have much time, so all I'll say is that I love how everything is entertwined together. It's still very intriguing.

Excellent work!

Since my reviews seem to be random rambles, I'll make it more sencical and take it one section at a time.

Travis: I liked how he met the same trader whom Eliya was with. He's very witty, also. Good character developement.

Eliya: The fact that she didn't know she was leaving Morandian makes it seem ammusing. It's as if she doesn't have total control over her actions. Well, none of them really do, actually.

Avar: I like his personality. Very smart. And he thinks things out - another good quality.Probably my favorite so far.

Jevirae: Heh, she's very ammusing and stubborn. I like the fact that the boy was distraught that she might not run for him.

Everything was well written, but watch your spelling, as I've said before.

Look forward to reading more!

Kudos!

Never think of your works as long! They are too enjoyed to be!

I really don't know what else to say, because the other words are already used up, so.. I guess I'll say it was... uhm... IMACULATE. There we go. What a wonderful word, aye?

Sorry, I'm rambling. And I'm also impatient to be off to the next chapter. So, I'll bid you adue.

W4J

-This is probably the most random review you've gotten. TAB!-OH, and it's probably just because I'm tired. Things don't seem to come out right when one's tired. So I'll stop making them come out.Right...

NOW.

Great chapter. Like before, there are some spelling issues, but overall, you did a wonderful job.

Off to next chapter!

- runs -

Once again, this story amazes me. The way you've got it developed and the plot line; it's just all amazing.

And no, it's not going to slowly! Anyways, you're the author and you know what pace it SHOULD be going at.

Anyways, I'm off to the next chapter!

W4J

I like that you're keeping the stories at the same order. It's less confusing.

I also like the supense you're giving. Where are they going? Who is the boy (I have somewhat of an inkling)? And, do they ever meet?

Very good... can't wait to read more!

W4J

Brilliant masterpiece, I must say. Seriously, you should go to a publisher. I'm sure they would LOVE your work!

There were only a few spelling errors, but otherwise, it was -once again- amazing.

Bravo!

I can't believe I didn't read this sooner! What was I thinking??

Fabulous work my friend, I especially like the accents and stuff from Jevirae. I also like the names a lot. Very unique.

I did notice though, that the characters stories were rather repetitive, with the little boy and all. But it's nothing too serious and, overall, was a wonderful read!

I'm off to read more now, and do expect more reviews!

WJ4

I hope you haven't given up on this or anything; sorry it's been a while since I've read or reviewed. It is rather nice to have some answers finally... now I'm just wondering about the boy...