"Paint the walls with your fairytale dreams" I love the second ssection, tis very lovely.

hehe... twee is a funny word.

I like this poem, for it seems to captivate the essence of memory and nostalgia. Tis indeed brilliant and I give you applause *claps*Thanks for the review!

Wow. That was excellent and beautiful and what poetry should be. I like how you put in "fashion a yen", I just think that phrase is cool. The whole thing built up real well, but at the last line "Poof" it reminded me of seeing a magician going up in smoke...And that made this poem truly amazing. Good job! you get mr. smiley :-)

The beginning of this was so lovely and christmassy and then the end kind of turned light and summary. Loved that about it, really gave a feel of looking backwards. Idea was brilliant, very orginal and kind of warming if that makes sense. Excellent piece, well done x

Man I've got no idea what some of the words mean. What's chaparral and what's chateaux? And what does it mean by "fashion a yen"? There are all these murky parts in your poem I don't understand. *is forlorn*

I think you should rephrase the part about "Midsummer's Day...not caring that..." coz it's strange how you start off all Christmassy with such snowy rapture...and then here you suddenly reject it...there's a contradiction. Perhaps you could mention a change of mind...[and haphazard flights of fancy]?

I like the stanza about the gauche faux pas.:) Very understandable, that. *grins* But I don't get the end. WHY DID YOU GO POOF. It was so anticlimax. I think you should have left it at "magic" and ended.

I still don't get what "twee" means though.xD Oh, and I'm still trying to think up something to write for chacha but like I said, what kind of title is that.@_@

Anyways, keep updating! Heh.