Wow. Images is all I can say. Very good.

Very beautiful. I really like the way you merge nature and thoughts. I especially liked the part:

"One side light, the other dark / but which is good?"

It's very deep, but not in the annoying way.

There is so much specific phrasework in this that it is hard to pick just one and say it was marvelous. The entire work reflects well the topic and enhances the mystery. Very well developed and written.