This is... excellent. You are going on my favorites list.

"Darling, you were my heroin romance... Now I'm b-r-e-a-k-i-n-g the habit."

The last line stands out. It's so brutal, but it's still so poetic.

Wonderful.

"Love's last massacre" Oh God, that line tore me up inside. This poem is so... real. Keep going!

WOW this is amazing. vivid and reminds me of stained glass. beautiful.

oh i love! great sensual detail...