good job on this poem. I'm not much for poetry so i don't know how valid my comments are but oh well. I like the chorus alot and also these lines are my fav "A troubled soul, a twisted path/A crooked house about to fall/A fraying rope about to snap/And Mother Dear saw to it all"

also, in response to my comment that was left for me... the wife is the ghost... how she was saying come home with me. he died. theyre both ghosts. i hope that clears it up a bit...

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hey thanks for the review. ur poem was really good. it was twisted and comforting.

hii mike. i know you imed me a while ago but aim and me are not friends right now. it's letting me talk to some people and not others -.-

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yay poem/song! yay violent poem/song! yay good violent poem/song!