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bubbles47
2007-07-12
ch 1,
abuseFinnish it!
Please what is with you and leaving cliff-hanging endings?
please finnish it!
bubbles
amber-skies
2007-05-31
ch 1,
abusethis is pretty good, two things; one, high heels is spelt with a double 'E' not 'EA', (sorry, things like that bugg me, i'm an OC) and also, you should have more conversation between the two; i mean, not many guys who you've pretty much never spoken to would say yeah, come over and talk anytime and if he did, the girl wouldn't say are you sure you don't mind, she's probably just say thanks - but that's my opinion, besides, i dont' even know the characters yet, so that's probably just how they work - but change the high heels thing
Alenor
2006-12-08
ch 7,
abuseoh they kissed! i can't wait for more to see what happens. cya later ~ Alenor.
Jenna
2006-11-30
ch 7, anon.
abuseHey Annie!! Love the update! FINALLY! OMG YAHO!! :) anyhoo i am obessive! yay!!
!* Jenna Boo Benna *!
pull-the-trigger
2006-11-06
ch 7,
abuseAH! You updated! I like it, oh yea and did you take that halloween picture? You need to send me it if you did, ya know my e-mail right? If not its

Alrighty well I'm done with this review.

-

Fallen Angel.
Your Favorite Person <3
2006-10-17
ch 7, anon.
abuseGRACE!
I will KILL you. i hate your stupid leave-you-hanging endings. i truly do.
write more on this story soon, because its my favourite.

ps. write the dedicated to me story =]
...i guess now u know who this is lol
Kimmmmmm
2006-10-11
ch 7, anon.
abuseHELLO YOU!

Love the making fun of my giddiness. Only I wasn't too sure about the makeout session things. There's sessions? o.O Anywho, yes. Blob tag is my new best friend, for a reason I shall inform you of on MSN. You might have to hit me tomorrow.

Luf,-Kim.
Sam
2006-10-05
ch 7, anon.
abuseawesome awesome chapter...keep it up! ciao!
Scott
2006-10-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseOne word:

ROFL

Actually thats five..

Rolling on the floor laughing.

Mind you, I didn't even laugh.

Yet I did get that warm fuzzy feeling when your about to grin.

Also I had a serious kick out of this.

Trying to peice together who was who. Of course It eventually came.

Sean:

Oubviously my beloved brother.

Okay, so sue me, it’s a bad habit. I developed it when Sean- yes, good old, quite, well behaved Sean!- developed an obsession with jumping out at me and scarring me half to death in the dark room that used as a storage room at school for art. I would go around the dark corner and he would jump down on me from the ceiling (there was a small ledge that he had somehow managed to get up onto, and he hung a black curtain we had found down in front of him so there was no way in hell I could see him) and land about two centimeters away from me, I would just... collapse. My knees just gave away I would find myself on the floor, shaking, with Sean leaning against the wall, laughing his head off, muttering something about how he couldn’t believe I fell for it every single time. I’ll admit it was hilarious afterwards, but freaking scary at the moment!

LOL.

Josh:

No clue who he, I don't know many people sounds like a good kid;“JOSH!” I shouted, jumping up and hugging him. A look of complete disbelief and horror settled onto his face.

Liz:

Who could fall madly in love "sean"?

Scary >.<

Walter:

That was VERY cruel, how does you devoted brother feel? I mean WALTER? Couldn't you think of something more nice? I mean "Scott" Is a very fine name, but WALTER?

Overall it was pretty good I enjoyed it, I WOULD read the sequel.

89/100
without-you-im-fine
2006-10-04
ch 7,
abuseAw :) Yay! lol. I like Matt.. sounds cute hehe
julieeee
2006-09-06
ch 1, anon.
abusearent you gonna keep going? if you dont... i'll cry. and you dont want me to cry, do you? =P
KG Jonta
2006-07-31
ch 6,
abuseAww, Matt's so sweet!
Callisto Jean
2006-07-19
ch 6,
abuseAww that was sweet!

What about Josh, Sean and the other people? Did they really do that to her? I'd never call them friends then. 'Best' friends with people like that is going way too far...

Update soon please!
Callisto Jean
2006-07-19
ch 5,
abuseBad mother! Gr! Hehehe.
Callisto Jean
2006-07-19
ch 4,
abuseDoes Sean happen to like Annie? I'm just getting that 'ooh' vibe!

On to the next chapitre! (I think I spelled that right...)
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