this is really good! i love it!

it hurts knowing everything is a lie

Really great poem. It's got the confused feeling down. It's rediculous that you're 13 and writing like this. Good job!

Interesting. Not sure I understansd it but this isn't the first time I didn't understand something. ~_^ Great write just the same. Keep'em coming.

Well, lie or not its kind of confusing. Cool.