 EyesGoToTheSoul 2006-09-17 . chapter 1this is really good! i love it!
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 lordelfy 2006-08-14 . chapter 1 it hurts knowing everything is a lie |
 burn our city 2006-08-12 . chapter 1Really great poem. It's got the confused feeling down. It's rediculous that you're 13 and writing like this. Good job! |
 Needa S 2006-06-21 . chapter 1Interesting. Not sure I understansd it but this isn't the first time I didn't understand something. ~_^ Great write just the same. Keep'em coming. |
 anewcreatureinchrist 2006-06-15 . chapter 1Well, lie or not its kind of confusing. Cool. |