What a poignant look on love! We often lose ourselves when a boy gets thrown into the mix. Favoriting!

Wow this is so amazing, and beautiful - i loved it.

Reading many of your poems, I am very entranced. You express feelings with cruel metaphors and I like the format. It's almost simple but the words are complex. I like the way you compared her dreams to a butterfly, and how often do we forget our own goals for a boy. Great job.

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