In the part where the Author Jean responds that no one else has a problem with the mistreatment of the slug. THe part where she types: Why are still reading my work if it is “immature” and “whiny”? Just add 'you' in-btw are ands still. That's about all i have. Keep up the good work. Here's a piece of advice from writer to writer:"never give up if you still wanna try when others try to bring you down."

i really did like the irony of it all. life is full of it. and just about evrywhere u turn u can find a person doing of saying the very thing they criticized. anyway, very nice

Haha, irony is always a good thing in stories like this. I love how she was just *asking* for negative feedback and complained when she got it. Good job. P