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| Aneice 2006-06-16 ch 1,   | That's really good. Keep it up, alliterations are so fun! |
| verifyme 2006-06-16 ch 1, | Short but good. You used the W's very well. Nicely written! |
| Thenardier 2006-06-16 ch 1, | Cute, I like it. The alliteration does not seem to be overdone in my opinion. Good job on a nice concise poem. |