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| Midnight Star Lights 2006-07-01 ch 1,  | abuseI love it.. WINKS :P |
| suki9870 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abuseLike I told you before, ease up on the talky-parts, and try to describe thinks a bit obscurely for the sake of an eerie-like effect. Other than that, its pretty sweet, if not an interestng blend between modern society and vampirism. ~ suki9870 ~ |
| The Banshee's Tears 2006-06-16 ch 1, | abusei likey... |