loved it!

Wow! This was absolutely amazing. After I read the first chapter I was hooked and had to read to the end. You are an amazing author, and the relationship between James and Rachel was beautiful. Thank you for posting this, it was an absolute pleasure to read.

1 word Aw!

Sweet, sorta rushed ending.. But ehh, I enjoyed reading it anywho.. :D

Overall a good story. I liked James, but it would have been really nifty if we got to see from his perspective.

OEmmGee ,
i love this story , !
I like how James came BACK!
& the part where he saw his daughter in the bookstore was making my heart race like no other. I mean I already knew that he was going to find out sooner or later, but i mean... Wow! & i can't believe that he went back with Rachel... Wait. that is a lie. He loves her & Etc. So i could believe. l0l. Any ways, i read this story in a DAY!
Good job makingg it (;
Anna sounds cutee.

aww...cute story. i LOVED the ending! ;)

Gosh, could Anna BE more cute? Great story!

So short, yet so sweet :)

aww that was an adorable story. James sounds really hot XD lol. I like it and it was very well written. I hope you are one of the lucky ones and someone wants this published because it is amazing!

This is a really great story!

I like it!

Ri

i really loved it! i think that Rachel did do the right thing though
charlotte

This was so beautifully perfect.
Great story!!

I read this story awhile (month) back and totally forgot to review it, but I really enjoyed it! I like your writing style!