I quite liked both the rhythm and flow-ish-ness...(blah) of this. I'd say more beyond the cliche "I liked this", but I'm really not sure what to say...

I love the sadness and dreariness of this poem...it's beautiful, i love the rhythm and the repititon...very discriptive...keep it up

Beautiful in a haunting, tragic way. I liked your poem very much, and the repetition of 'it's only blood' worked very well.