Reviews for A World With No Sky

Stingra 2006-07-05 ch 1,	abuseThis is a great story, very stirring and it made me wonder about the Labyrinthe that the old man lives in. You've created great imagery with your words, and have written a very impressive story. Thanks for a good read,-Stingra
Tony Guidotti 2006-06-18 ch 1,	abuseThis is good, 2 questions. 1. How does the title relate? 2. Why can they not live in a world of ice? You could make a longer tale about this. It could be the story of a youth who sneaks out and explores the frozen world.
Cerne 2006-06-17 ch 1,	abuseWow, amazing. I love the concept of the Labyrinth. I really like how you took the perspective of the old man, you did a good job of expression how someone of his age and wear would think. I wish there was more you were planning to write, but this seems like just a short story. Oh well. It was very nice. I'm not very good at grammar, but for the most part I didnt notice anything wrong.