|Reviews for White Hot Heat|
| ash the arsnist 8/25/06 . chapter 1
amazing diction... the last few lines were absolutely incredible
| Leaving Here 8/3/06 . chapter 1
i like how you write. its very cool!Liz
| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 6/30/06 . chapter 1
wow this is really amazing, the words seem to stab you like arrows and knives, like it says at the begininng.
keep it up!
| a lonely september 6/27/06 . chapter 1
this was really hot. it's so well written and sweet and... just really good. : )
| Flies 6/16/06 . chapter 1
This sent chills down my spine, it's beautifully written! I think the first two lines "shoot me with arrows (stop throwing knives)" really hit the reader (at least me) and makes you just keep reading. I like the happy metaphoric clichés and then the "white. hot. heat", it's really well done, this poem, is just, marvelous.