Oh, oh, oh! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Nice! This is getting interesting...loved the ending.

Hm...sorry I havent' reveiwed. GTA: San Andreas is addicting. I like this story alot, but it needs main charecters.

Ahh...this reminds me of Star Wars! It's good. I can't wait to read more. I couldn't see any porblems with it whatsoever.

Anyways, I'll probably leave you about a review a day. You see, I'm living in my hosue with two other people and to use the shower before school I must get upat 5 every morning. I gotta be picked up for school at 7 and outta the shower at 5:40, so I have tons of freetime in the morning. Sorry for that explination, haha.

Hey, I didn't know you had an account on here! You have an account on all the creative sites that I have accounts on! Cool! This is really good!

Hey! Wow!! It's been a long time huh? lol. Just wanted to be the first to review this new story of yours! I got to say it's great so far! Can't wait to read more! See ya soon! ^^

Love

~LadySilverfang~

p.s: I'm glad that you like my story! But it may take a while for me to upload the new chapter. I hope you wait for it! ^^ Well anyway, contiune writing!!