Wow, I just loved The V Word and then you come out with this.. great story. I loved it, although, Marla was a bit.. I'm not sure what word for her, but she was a bit much for me to understand? All I know is I didn't like her character very much, but it did make the story interesting. Good job.

LOVE'D IT!! Awesome story! It was really good

You are now my favorite online author. Some places falter a bit, like in V-word, you used vampirette to much, but the plot and characters totally make up for it.

HAHAHHA., i LOVE your stories. They amuse me very very much. =) Whens the next sequel coming out?

Brilliant story. Loved it.

Love it. (:

Hm I have to say I liked the first one of this trilogy better. There was more meaning behind the violence, anger and frustration in that. This story just seemed to delve into their relationship and then seemed as if there needed some rivallry in the story to work it work, so it was tacked on. Do you get what I mean or is it sounding like an insult? Because that's not how I meant it. Nevertheless, I still did enjoy reading this. Well, heave ho! Onto the third I go!

I have joined your fan-club. But aanyywaay, though I'm sure you've already sorted the matter out since this story is finished.. at least you can now have the knowledge that you have the same ideas for a story as a published author. Doesn't that kinda make you feel proud of yourself? Plagiarism = not cool. I'm sure every self-respectful author knows that. Thus you = cool (well not uncool anyway), since I believe you haven't plagiarised. Dear goodness I sound hyper, probably due to the fact I've been listening to the Shrek Karaoke Dance Party song repeatedly. *D you really want to hurt me? oh! DO you really want to make me cry* heheheh so cute. yes. well bye.. off to actually read this chapter I'm commenting on.

Oh yes, about the story, I like how you captured the brother-sister relationship. It's not often you read about such a friendly one. It made me smile. So yes yes, off to read.

I just finished reading these three stories, and this one is by far my favorite. I have to confess that I am always much more interested in the characters of a story rather than the plot, and I can tell that you have spent a whole lot of time and effort to give Marla and Callum life. You did an amazing job with them. Thank you for posting this story, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Hey. Loved the story, lol loved how random it was (vampire in the tree...) but somehow i feel as though the story isn't complete. The fact that he never really gets his memory back or what happens after he does (even though you've revealed the villian...) i mean, maybe it could have occured simultaneously? I dunno, but other than that, i loved it. U're a talented writer and there were some parts i thought were original and funny (in the beginning when hes reading her mind and she says something about being attracted to women and other situations). anyway keep writing!!

i thought this story was great. marla really came alive! i love these magic/romance stories!!

great story one of the best i've read really .
keep writing stuff like that please.
u'r writings are what keeps hopeless romantics like my self going .
:):)

Hi. I just read all three of your stories in this series...ish... thing. I really loved all of them, even though I probably shouldn't be reading the more...explicit parts. Whatever. Anyway, I was just wondering something that may sound really odd. Can I write a fancfic for this? I mean, even if I do, I wouldn't post it, and if I ever wanted to, I would make sure to get your permission, but I just wanted to ask you first. I mean, this story feels more...yours, than published stories do, so I just wanted to make sure you were okay with it. Thanks, and I loved your story.

It's official, I adore everything you write. :)

Wow, I adore Marla's brash style. I loved her middle-finger salute, it just cracked me up. :)

And the steamy scene on the couch was so realistic... woah.