Welcome to Hell.

This poem should make anybody think twice before doing something stupid.

I'm very impressed. Well done!

But should this be labeled "fantasy"? It is, indeed, a sad reality.

Sheol is Hebrew from death isn't it? You're right, that is scary. Enough to get me fired up.

wow...this is really good. I like the way this just flows so nicely...and the emotions show greatly

Sorrow