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Wogan May
2006-07-26
ch 1,
abuseWelcome to Hell.

This poem should make anybody think twice before doing something stupid.

I'm very impressed. Well done!

But should this be labeled "fantasy"? It is, indeed, a sad reality.
Trinity Dragon
2006-07-12
ch 1,
abuseSheol is Hebrew from death isn't it? You're right, that is scary. Enough to get me fired up.
Sorrowful Dreams
2006-07-01
ch 1,
abusewow...this is really good. I like the way this just flows so nicely...and the emotions show greatly

~Sorrow~
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