|Reviews for Lost Here|
| smoke another grin 12/26/10 . chapter 1
"a child with dirty hands and a runny nose
puppy dog eyes and jumbled words" - lost,
"so fast like the wind and my feet" -running away
"and you might be a solid rock," - maybe, maybe found a hand to hold?
"or just another pretty promise with no real meaning" - no, just another reason to lose hope
"(I am lost, not stupid)" - lost hope,turned bitter.
Eh, I'm just another biologist with nothing left to disect but awesome literature.
| Amalia Jagd 6/21/06 . chapter 1
that last line puts the whole meaning in there. i love it!
| Delete this account right now 6/16/06 . chapter 1
You remind of a friend I have whose absolute worst pet peeve is too be called stupid...funnily enough every time I see her I condemn her to stupidity...oddly enough: she's my only friend that I know face-to-face. Irony...the spice in life
| aaidenkae 6/16/06 . chapter 1
lovely. i loved the second line especially well. thank you.-kae
| Leaving Here 6/16/06 . chapter 1
so much like my poems but i haven't posted them on fictionpress...Write one!