this is so beautiful, the title the poem, everything, i wish i read this sooner.. it just amazing :)
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this is amazing
and the title and everything is just so perfect
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Excellent. Like your other poem, short but very clear. It's so sad too, distracting yourself with useless things just so you don't have to think about someone.

isnt this one of your old ones megan it sounds familiar...its a pretty cool one though.

The repetition in this works well. A crazy image, really, but the idea works. I'm adding you to my author alerts. You're interesting. Keep writing! :)

aw, ** this was beautiful. and so sad. heartbreaking. you've really got something here. antimemory, damn, that's amazing. i dunno what else to say. this gets to me. . . is it my mood or something? i don't know, but this is great.

the whole thing, including the title, made me think of so many different thngs. i think it's a really clever idea. well done.

The title had me positivly floored. antiMemory is just - guh, I am uncoherent and just In LOVE with it. Really, brillant way of hooking someone into a poem, the title is often stressed with near-same logic of abuse (AKA - My Immortal-ish poems with near identical titles = no creativity; your poems pwns every poem like it and more.). No, seriously; I adore the title but I also LOVE the poem - it is breathtaking and just stylistically unique. It descends to its point and is done so with a sort-of eloquency that I haven;t seen in a while. Really; nicely done.

~* Noelle

Reii like it. =]but you tryin to destroy your vision just cuz he didn't get on AIM last night? must i go smack you? :P

interesting. i love the title - antimemory.

Interesting style you've got there :-)

really like the repetinio, and the middle stanza. reminds me of me :)