This is cute. I like the simple rhythm and images. Adieu, Kat

WAH!! that was one nostalgic trip... this poem is really fascinating. i loved the way it's narrated. thank you for sharing. keep it up!! ^_^

I like how I can relate to this... wanna be a kid again. (not that i really aged mentally)

"of fun at the seashore" reminds me of the tongue twister we would all used to try and say as fast as we could. "sally sells sea shells and the seashore." :)

Love the ending