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no.peace.los.angeles
2006-06-20
ch 1,
abuseLOL, that was cute. I wrote a poem using The Night Before Christmas in high school once, and it was the night before the concert. I enjoyed that poem. These are fun. Keep writing! :)
Melanie Layugan
2006-06-20
ch 1,
abuseThis makes the list. You have certainly, a sense of humor.
Basara
2006-06-19
ch 1,
abusehahaha!... nice
Tiki Toxic
2006-06-18
ch 1,
abuseI loved it! I remember the days of doing exams in high school (I'm not that old, it's only been a year), and everyone went into hysteria and panic around exam time, but it's about time someone put all of that feeling into writing. Well done! - Tiki
Bananas in a Blender
2006-06-17
ch 1,
abuseThat was too cool for words.

Lines I laughed during:

''And the science department shot all the tutors.''

"Child development started to act their shoe-size, not age."

"And chemistry pupils questioned their worth."

Yeah, pretty much every other line, too.

I'm jealous!! You just made my hit list. Um, I mean, fave list.
dancerintheroom
2006-06-17
ch 1,
abuseI know the feeling all to well. Thank you for making me smile.
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