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| a lonely september 2006-06-19 ch 1,   | i like how this has a sense of truth to it. the last line, that is. this is really well written. |
| write25 2006-06-17 ch 1, | hmm not sure what i think of this one. the subject matter is deep ("God only has mercy for the optimistic") but i think you could have done a better job. ~mariah |
| Princess-anna57 2006-06-17 ch 1, | :( Sad. Keep writing. ~Anna~ |