The first stanza of this poem keeps pacing through my head. I know that really, four lines is way too short for a poem (although I guess Emily Dickinson could pull it off) but those four lines are pretty much perfect. I liked the rest, don't get me wrong (the second verse was the weakest, I thought), but the first four lines... whew. Something about the rhythm of "the somnambulist strikes a pose". I don't know.

Also, since I'm too lazy to really review much, just wanted to say that I loved Act III. Keep writing, you're really good.

I liked it a lot! the dreamy tune and the rhyming pattern was really nice in an odd way.

Excellent.

things that make you go hmm...Thats something my dad would always say and it fits the poem perfectly, it's very odd BUT in a good way, it definately makes you think volumes about what you are writing. I liked the rhyming pattern alot, it fit the poem.