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| Band Geek17 2007-01-25 ch 3,   | These are absolutely amazing. How have I not seen your work before? I love the use of the senses in all of these - they add reality, even though it's figurative language. The imagery is priceless. And amazingly enough, you've managed to create such original pieces from such concise descriptions! I admire these. Do keep writing! |
| sarah1491 2006-10-09 ch 2, | Wow. Amazing. Maybe even better than the Twilight one. I love the use of personification here. It was excellent and just truly wonderful to read. You are a very talented poet so never give up. :) -Sarah |
| sarah1491 2006-10-09 ch 1, | Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Your description of twilight gives a wonderful image. Very descriptive without seeming informative. I like the shortness of the final line as well as the italics. Very, very nice. I'm going to read more now! :) -sarah |
| poemkitten7 2006-06-17 ch 1, | Wow, really pretty and beautifully written. Nice work. Keep writing. :) |