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| Come Down Now They Will Say 2006-06-18 ch 1,   | nice repetition, very effective. got through to me. Maybe for once you won't be confused/But don't ever think this is your fault/It's not like you went and created it all/easy to relate to |
| Frogalog 2006-06-17 ch 1, | beautifully written, and good rhyming. i love the overall layout and organization. good job. |