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Reviews For: Pathetic Obsessive Girls Anonymous - Reviews: Page 1 of 30

InsaneRomantic15
2008-07-23
ch 27,
abuseDare I say it? I simply adore Amy! He's the type of male character that I love above everyone else!
InsaneRomantic15
2008-07-23
ch 6,
abuseLove, love, love this story! I feel so out of the loop for not reading it before!

I do have a tiny bit of critique, though. The main characters in your stories look eerily similar to each other. Slender and blonde. It's hard to distinguish the difference other than by looking at the names/personalities. Usually when that is the case in writing, the main characters all look like the author of the story. I do apologize if I sound at all presumptuous. Just a little curious.
InsaneRomantic15
2008-07-23
ch 2,
abuseI love characters that love Asian guys! I've been such a fangirl since I started watching Kdrama's way back when. Sadly, the channel with said shows is no longer on air. Thank god, for the internet! Otherwise I'd die without the images of spectacular men!

Whoa. Yeah, I sound creepy. Like something akin to a pervy old man.

Anywho. I'd try to write an insightful review, but my brain doesn't always work that way. To simply put what I'm thinking: This story is amazing!
charm en route
2008-07-05
ch 36,
abuseAHA! I EFFIN KNEW IT!
Okay, well, technically I figured that Van would take the spoon and get it made into an engagement and/or wedding ring and then ask her to marry him.
And I was so close but you had to be all-knowing and smartical that you had to add in that little twist (because I forgot that silverware tends to be stainless steel too).
Anywho, I loved it. All of it. Yaay!
And even though I loved Amy as a character I'm super glad you let her get back with Van because the whole time I was saying 'No, Renee! Don't do it!'
:p
I laugh really loudly when I find something surprisingly extremely funny, and with this story I did that a lot. Which made my cats very angry, because they like to sleep (even though I like to poke them and wake them up because they get mad and go 'mewah!')
I embarass myself, and I embarass myself by telling you this.
I'm a little hyper because of the way this story ended, so I'll blame it on that.

By the way, obviously since you wrote this story a good long while ago, I'm defintely considered a new reader. And I didn't mind the review replies at all. Actually, I usually find them annoying, but your replies actually had to do with the story and the way you were thinking of the characters and the situations. Which was a pretty cool insight, if I do say so myself. So, now that you know that at least one new reader didn't mind, you could consider leaving them up unless (of course) you don't want them there anymore.
I don't know, this review is long enough.
:D
Thanks!
charm en route
2008-07-05
ch 18,
abuseAh! it's hard for me to read this because I'm the type of reader who gets embarassed/scared/happy/whatever for her characters.
Which means I have to stop every couple of seconds and go 'NO!' Because Renee seems to find herself in these situations a lot.


bo at you for having awesome characters!


(and i never review halfway through a story like this, especially when the ending has already been posted. but i severly hope that kyle isnt thinking shes a golddigger and only with Van because he's asain and famous :o)

ps- and here's an actual review comment, i really do like your style of writing. seriously, you know how to drag your readers in and keep them interested
rockjam
2008-07-03
ch 35,
abuseone of the best stories ever!! I loved the characters. :D
liz
2008-06-18
ch 1, anon.
abusethis introduction sounds interesting. i congratulate on its uniqueness.
Shishou
2008-06-06
ch 2,
abuseF4 as in Boys over Flowers, right? I've read some of the manga and watched all of the Japanese drama, and right now I'm just in a total Matsumoto Jun fangirl craze. He played Domyouji in the Japanese drama, if you didn't already know. :]

Just to be sad, I think I'll imagine myself as Renee... *far away look*
Mellifluence
2008-06-02
ch 36,
abuseYou know what? Other than the fact that this fic was DANG awesome (unrealistic plotlines and some pretty cliched parts aside, of course), it has also reaffirmed what I already know - namely, that:

我爱我的祖国,
我爱我的救主,
...and have I mentioned how much I LOVE being a pathetic obsessive fangirl?!

(So glad you do too!! ^_~)
theGreyPebble
2008-05-06
ch 2,
abuseaHAHAH vanness from f4?! ahahahahha
i like 仔仔 better.. after he cut his hair.
but wtv
Wilby
2008-04-20
ch 36,
abuseHello! I just finished reading POGA and I thought I'd share my thoughts.

You mention in the final author's note that you'll be deleting all of the old reviewer responses. I read most of them and I think before you go through with that you should make sure you're not getting rid of information relative to the story that readers wouldn't know otherwise.

I found a few things missing that I would have liked to have been addressed. One is that we never see the little girl again, which I suppose is not very important but I wondered about her often. Another is Renee's hypoglycemia, which never came up again and made it seem like a petty plot tool used for the one moment and then forgotten. And last is the personal background of the group members, Van specifically. It was a surprise to find out that he grew up in L.A. - some warning would have been nice - and you never mentioned how the band met and formed. Again, maybe unimportant but, all the same, something I would have liked to know.

I really enjoyed how the faith of Van and Renee brought them together. Which, coming from an atheist, I hope menas a lot. It's not something I see often in stories but it gave them a certain level of intimacy and connection that I think is very important. I've also grown up participating in many choirs and have had the pleasure to sing "Be Thou My Vision" with all four parts. So, I have experienced first-hand how awesomely moving the song is. I enjoyed that scene a lot.

Hopefully I haven't offended you through the course of my response, because I loved the story very much. The style and grammar were amazing and I had no other issues except the ones listed above. Thank you for taking the time to conceive, put down into words, and share your work with me.

-Wilby :)
PeterMoore
2008-04-04
ch 7,
abusethis is a really good story. as mickeyD's would say, "I'm lovin' it."
Miz Em
2008-03-25
ch 4,
abuseOhhmy gosh! Why aren't these girls real because I'm one of them!! Lol I really like this chapter and the Renee was honest, she's deffinately seen enough dramas to know how it goes down.
cls81690
2008-02-13
ch 35,
abuseYou are horrible. Evil. Wretched spawn of Harlequin. You just completely ruined my plans for a good night's sleep. Do you know why? Because it's now 3 minutes til midnight. I tried to go to bed at ten. But NO, couldn't happen! I couldn't go to sleep--I was reading POGA! If POGA had been a book I wouldn't have been able to put it down. As it is, I couldn't turn off the iMac. Now I'm sitting in front of the computer ordering myself not to go look up the sequel and knowing I'm about to fail deliciously. Each character is imperfect but realistic, and the plot is unusual but believable, and...did I mention the part where it was good enough to keep me away from my precious hammock and sleeping? Yeah, it's that good. Curse you. It's wonderful. Sorry about...me. I'll be less grouchy in the morning...theoretically...assuming I'm not exhausted. And even if I am pissy and sleepy come six, I won't regret reading this. Because it was quirky, flawed, and beautiful. How much more perfect can a story get?
akaCHEEKS
2008-02-08
ch 2,
abusehaha nice F4 i know them. miraculously. wow. good chapter so far though.
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