I quite get the feeling that a small boy has written this, perhaps because of expressions like "bestest" and the way the story is told. I'm not sure wether I like that or not, but I do like the detailed descriptions.

Wow, this story really got my heart racing. By far the best I have found in the Thriller section so far; in fact, it's going on my favs. Awesome, sad--great story!

Wow. That was a seriously touching, amazing story. It was so deep! Bravo!

hahaha i know you're only joking when you say it's finished. hahaha. you ARE only joking...i ORDER you to continue. dont make me get nice on your white beehind!

love yas mike, but i WILL maim for the sake of a good story.

Wow. That was heart wrenching. Nicely written, as usual.

*HeLlO*

Wow! Great stuff!! I urge you to continue! You will rite? Please say yes. I love your style of writing! and you ideas! Priceless!

this story is oh so every interesting.

UPDATE ASAP! OK?!... hehe..

Your dear friend, (even tho I dont know you)

*~chocolatesmilez~*