duh..i don't understand why Did Nathan appeared on the story if in the first place,sum and zach were the one who will be ended up together..because of nathan,the story only made longer and boring..i wish you wrote more about sum and zach...

I have spent the last few days reading your story! But whoa its long! Took me ages - and i spent half my nights awake :P

The story was really cool but i got the feeling that you were really trying to finish it quick near the end. Admittedly the beginnin of the story had me roped in straight away - i totally loved zach from the first time he utters a word! I kept hoping she'd end up with him lol even though nathan, bless him, was such a nice guy. It would have been nice if everyhing worked out so that he wasnt so miffed with her but i totally agree with you - it would have been unlikely were this real life.

Lol wow i cant believe there came a point that roxanne was on speaking terms with her! But some things sort of irked me : for instance when roxanne spilled the beans about the kiss with zach, summer wasnt the least bt annoyed! And whoa does she spend half the story crying :P lol but dont take that as criticism, i loved zach and his personality - its so realistic - and so attractive :) i love how summer and zach arent a lovey dovey couple and his words are few, but they speak volumes.

Anyway great job on this story :) thank u for writing it! Xx

Ohmygoodness. So...much...drama! I really like your characterization in this. Everyone was in depth, they all had details and a backstory. I ended up having moments when I hated, and moments when I loved all of them (well, except Chris, but oh well). It was really good.

Keep writing.

LONGEST FREAKING STORY OF MY LIFE.

Or so it seemed.

I almost died a couple of times there.

It took me 5 days.

And the first 3 dragged along.

And at times I questioned how you could

DARE put this under "romance"

(even though it's not, I thought it was until 5 seconds ago)

and at time I wanted to kill you.

But the ending was bittersweet.

I didn't like it.

AT.

ALL.

I absolutely hated the ending.

It was to...open for me.

But, I fear that if there was more

then I would hate it so I guess it's

better where it's at.

Mild grammatical problems, no biggie.

Drama/Suspense? Hells yeah.

Entertaining? Definitely.

Bittersweet? Mhm.

Cliche? Not realy, but kinda.

You know, the whole poor girl has rich guys swooning thing.

Amazing? Nothing short of it.

I LOVE your story, I've read it several times. Just wanted to point out that in the chapter where Zach and Summer go to NY, you mention Grand Central Station. Grand Central services Metro North and runs up toward New England, while all southern tracks (including NJ Transit) run through Penn Station. Not a big deal, but you might want to change that.

I hate this, it so sad that it came to an end. However, i must say that was the most satisfying ending i have ever read for a long time! Actually, not only the ending but the entire story, from the main characters to the supporting to the extras all so fulfilling. i could only wish there were more chapters to read.

Loved this story so much! Is one of my favourites ever and I'm so gonna miss Summer and Zach, I fell in love with them, actualy with all of your characters, even Roxanne. Thanks so much!

Oh my god! This is possibly the BEST story I have read. It lead me through a rollercoaster of different emotions. I couldn't stop reading it; I literarly read this in one sitting! I loved Zach so much since the beginning and even though Nathan is such an amazing guy, I really didnt want Summer with anybody else other than Zach. I absolutely loved their relationship together; how they could tell each other everything and just how close they were:) I was a little upset that Summer couldn't patch things up with Nathan but I really didn't see how they would. I was also upset with Shaya: she seemed like such a nice girl and then turned so mean but Icould see why. Different people have different reactions when faced with a person like Roxanne. I guess that was her defense against her and her revenge. And I guess she was so mean to Summer be ause she did break her brothers heart. Anyway I love your character developement. I love how different they all are and how you expressed all the problems in their lives and the way each of them dealt with it. Altogether this was a really well written story that just amazed me!

i lovd it! i like zach! hope ur one shots are ready..

this is my second time reading your story and i still love it. this is the story that i literally couldn't forget and i want to thank you for making this awesome story. :)

After sitting here for hours, I am so happy and yet so sad this story is over. I loved Summer and Roxanne and Zane! This story was so unbelievable beautiful. I feel you made a semi-cliche love triangle so sad that I didnt want anone to be hurt: which isn't usually how I feel. Thank you so much for such a wonderful story :)

Heh.

I still don't understand why you chose Zach over Nathan. I mean, COME ON! Nathan WAS a playboy turned one-woman man! Zach's character is and always be a badboy. A badboy, yet presumably a faithful one.

If you want to know, the main reason why I think Nate's character is better than Zach; it's because Zach's character stagnated. It didn't progress, unlike Nate. I find Nate's character more complex. And the first moment Zach and Summer got close, I knew they were going to be together. I actually wanted to be wrong at that point.

But I guess I have no right to take it any further than tell you my opinion.

BUT GUESS WHAT: My favorite line from the story came from Zach.

"Fuck you," Zach repeated. "Fuck you, Summer, fuck you and your guilt and your fucking urge to make everyone in the world but me happy."

Yeaah... Now I have expressed my feelings, I hope you write another story.

P.S: I actually read this story two - three months back, but I was lazy to leave a review. But when I felt like it, I forgot what I was going to say. :P

I miss Nathan. But I understand your reasons for not having them make up and 'just be friends' and everything.

Oh right - THIS WAS THE MOST AMAZING STORY EVER AND I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S FINISHED AND OMG IT WAS COMPLETELY, UTTERLY PERFECT.

Yeah. Not only did you have the perfect ending, but you also didn't make this story completley about the main girl getting the main guy. And the love triangle actually made me struggle to stake sides.

Thank you.

:)

So I finally finished reading this.

And it's seriously one of my favorite stories ever. I loved the ending! I love Zach, I love Summer, I love her new friendship with Roxanne, I love Hadley's happy ending, and I just love this whole freaking thing. Gosh.

Wow, this was so spectacular. I seriously couldn't pay attention in school for the past few days because all I could think about in class was how much I wanted to go home and read what happened with your characters next. (:

It was unfortunate that everything with Nathan and Shaya had to end that way, but oh well. Oh, and Eve and Michael? I love it. Perfect.

So, amazing job with this. I commend you for being able to get through something so long and making it so great at the same time! You are a wonderful writer. Keep up the good work, please!

NO!