|Reviews for Wildfire|
| XpheonixrisingX 6/9/11 . chapter 11
Oh, please continue this! Especially with such a maddening cliffhanger!
| SunnyD 11/14/10 . chapter 11
This story makes me want to cry with emotion. I hope you continue it!
| starlight-angel88 4/14/10 . chapter 11
Amazing story! Please keep writing!
| Daerana 4/11/10 . chapter 11
Wow... I really like this story. It is definately one of my favourites on fictionpress. Actually I think it is my favourite. Anyway... I really want to read more so please come back to writing this story. It is so very good and very well written.
PLEASE KEEP GOING!
| Kirsten 8/7/09 . chapter 11
i absolutely love your historical fiction! please write more of this story as I've recently started it after having finished reading 'Forsaken Identity' :) you're very concise with your history and your research of the time and era is pretty good! so refreshing, I'd love to see more!
| CaseOfYou 6/19/09 . chapter 1
Your writing is really great but it would be better if you updated once in a while!:) this story is better than some published work i've read
| Masquerade hide your face 12/8/08 . chapter 1
is there any more to this story it is so good?
| thenighting-gale 12/8/08 . chapter 11
are you going to finish this? :( because its wonderful. the writing is beautiful, and your characters have a lot of depth. I hope you finish this...sometime soon. because I would really like to know what happens to Kenna...and William. You've left so many questions, that you must continue writing. So we know if Dawn is the morning from her dream, if William saves her, everything...please?
| naufdude 10/3/08 . chapter 11
FINALLY! i almost gave up on you!
love this story! please update soon...
aw i would have liked to have read the emotions going through william! i mean i guess his POV would have been nice but hey! i'm just one persone!
| Calliope 9/27/08 . chapter 11
Great, great, great story. But you changed William's appearance in the last chapter. Instead of the black hair and eyes he's been described to have for the first ten chapters, he has blonde hair, blue eyes and... the tips of his eyelashes are blonde.
| naivete chica 9/15/08 . chapter 11
oh PLEASE please update soon. you are too mean, to leave it off like that. i want to know what happens next lol! i love thsi story. i love your characters, kenna isn't some superassassinator/fighter.. she's human. and so is william, he has feelings too. again, please update soon! )
| heavengurl899 9/13/08 . chapter 11
so you have an inconsistency in your story. In chapter 2 you described William..."He had a strong jaw, and dark black eyes, black hair, cut short above his ears."
Yet in chapter 11 you claimed "William nodded, his blue eyes bright, his face ruddy from the hard morning ride." and "his tousled blonde hair gleaming in the light. She noticed the tips of his eyelashes were as blonde as his hair, and for some reason..."
Do you have BETA's who read this? They should def. pick up issues (like inconsistencies) because the author is too immeresed in the story to deal with those problems. Oh and coming from a Pre-Med perspective it takes a bone much longer than a few days to heal and you might want to note that it takes people more than just a few days to fall in love (problems like that just happen because of poor character development). Anyways if you need help just let me know. Update soon. Oh and is this supposed to mirror similar events in Troy (Brad Pitt and that hot priestess) because I totally tried to make a story like that once and it looked really similar to yours (except a lot more drawn out) which is funny (at least to me it is) and slightly ironic.
| heavengurl899 9/13/08 . chapter 10
"Kenna exhales slowly" keep it in one tense...
| heavengurl899 9/13/08 . chapter 9
cute and short, if you ever do a revision you need to work on developing the characters more...they need more substance.
| heavengurl899 9/13/08 . chapter 8
haha what a hot chapter!