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| Fan Fan 2007-02-24 ch 1,   | I love the phrasing: "flowing so freely from the lies you so shunned away" Though I do prefer to read the second two lines together...but beautiful nevertheless, I love your work :) |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-14 ch 1, | Nice alliteration at the end. |
| marti10 2006-07-01 ch 1, | This is such a beautiful poem. Ahh, one of my favorite words. Embrace. I don't know why, but I like it a lot. Anyway, I have to apologise that I haven't released the second Famous novel yet. I will tomorrow I think. I couldn't write much because I'm in Europe at this very second. LOL. I was busy. I promice that I will write as much as I can.Excellent poem. I am so glad you released another one. |
| Celeste Se'oir 2006-06-24 ch 1, | That's so sweet, I'm happy for you. Good luck with this one. Later,~Ffuffy~ |
| heartbroken922 2006-06-24 ch 1, | lovely. truly lovely. it definitely has a lot of meaning to it. great job and thanks for the review. |
| Jodie Sinclair 2006-06-18 ch 1, | i love this Abby it rocks what made you write it? |