Loved it. Very profound with great imagery.

wow...excellent ending. I clicked on this because I've written a poem called 'Insomniac', and I wanted to see how someone else explored the same idea. Interesting. :-)

thanks for the review, much.

hey, good poetic-ness here. (see, this is why i've joined fictionpress, because i'm obviously so articulate. anyways.) you have some really intense phrases, like "these snares, these sheets". i like the twist at the end that the poem wasn't the regular "insomnia, blah blah" that most people write.

"i just had no inspiration for my dreams." that's quite eloquent, and interesting, and beautiful.